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angel6917
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0 posted 2000-02-01 09:28 AM


PLEASE BE HERE FOREVER

I never thought this could be,
that between you and me,
there'd be something so strong.

I could go the rest of my life,
with all your pain and strife,
and still do you no wrong.

I want to be there for you,
when you're down and you're blue,
I wanna make you feel better.

I want you to be here with me,
because you've set my spirit free,
please be here forever...

~Kristi Lynn
for Todd from Oconto


 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-01 10:31 AM


Wow, thats wonderful, I wish someone would have such feelings for me   Todd is very lucky to have someone like you.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
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2 posted 2000-02-01 10:51 AM


I wish Todd would see how I feel, 'cuz I've never fallen for someone as hard as I fell for him.  I'm more afraid that he'll just play me like most men do.  Thanks for you're support, it means a lot.
~Kristi Lynn

 "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-02-01 12:53 PM


you know what my mom would say? You never know unless you try..but with love..it's different. IF you try, you have the possibility of getting hurt..who wants to get hurt? I wish you luck with todd..and give yourself a pat on the back for this poem    

~~Lavada

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"




[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).]

sweetcollege_girl
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just about where I want to be
4 posted 2000-02-01 12:53 PM


I accidently replied three times, so I'm editing my messages..in tis one, I'll say again..Good Luck with todd! I hope he sees what a wonderful poet you are someday!

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).]

sweetcollege_girl
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just about where I want to be
5 posted 2000-02-01 12:53 PM


Again, I say good luck, and wonderful Poem...I'm gonna go reply to some more of your poems now  

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-01-2000).]

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