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Voyce Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 13Colorado |
i miss you with all my heart my soul yearns for you your love is huge and great your love creates who you are and tells who you want to be love is a food for life and when we miss love it hurts pain without love why? should i feel tis because i miss you and your love that all mighty food of lif what should i feel when should i feel it or is this just the beginning i need to know please tell me |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Wow, an excellent poem. I showed it to one of my friends, and they said it describes me, which I thought was sweet, so I thought I'd tell you that it means something to me, and I'm going to print out a copy and put it in my poetry book (under your name, of course.) Keep up the excellent work. ~Kristi Lynn "Sometimes people care too much. I think it's called love." -Winnie the Pooh |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
this is a great poem...i loved it...it had alot of feeling in it and one can tell that u really miss this person:P   :>:0 |
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