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Ender
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0 posted 2000-01-29 01:47 PM


*Playing Friend*
You do not seem to always be there
When I am around you
You seem to be in a dreamland
With your Prince Valiant
And not with me
The one you know cares
And when I am not around
I feel like you just are playing
Playing to be my friend
When all you want to do is get my hopes up
But, what if it works
And you do get my hopes up
Will you just drop them
Like a brick from a building
Or will you continue playing
Playing to be my friend

Is this just a game to you
Are you having fun
Or are you seriously being
A great friend of mine
Perhaps I will never know
Unless I get the guts
To be able to ask you
And find out what is true.


© Copyright 2000 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-01-29 05:03 PM


Great poem. So talk to this "friend" maybe they don't realise how you feel in this situation. At least if you talk to them you will know for sure what is going on and why.
Good luck and keep  

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