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Guardian Angel |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
White wings, Soft as Gossamer thread Pure Silver halo about her head Sun shines though her smile Lets all pain ebb for awhile In darkest times she comforts me Her wings enfolding, no one can see The hurt and bitterness locked in my heart All the pain and loneliness there from the start Her voice as clear as crystal bells A poignant story of life it tells Of destruction and loss from which I can't hide This lonely life I am forced to ride Her breath so sweet gives me new life Helps me deal with the pain and strife Eyes more focused, vision clear The end of the path now totally clear I see a rainbow on a cloudy day Please dear angel with me stay For there can be like you no another That’s why in life I called you Mother ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Ayla Member
since 1999-08-31
Posts 50 |
Beautiful poem..very sweet.. : ) ------------------ The heart is happiest when it beats for others.. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How beautiful and what a wonderful dedication to your mother  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis a wonderful piece and tribute. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
I agree it is a very beautiful poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Watcher, this is beautiful, a beautiful tribute to your mother ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very touching.....and guilt inducing. I have been so unnapreciative of my mother and father.... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thank-You all for reading.Still trying to get over the greif of her loss.Writing helps.Sorry to torture all of you. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So very beautiful Watcher! Am so sorry for your loss. This poem really touched me......... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Watcher......so beautiful ! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Watch...I cried reading your dedication to your mother. She has raised a good person by the love you display, a part of her shines in you! Lovely poem! My prayers are with you and may your heart be comforted! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Watcher this was beautiful! How sweet. I hope say day my kids will see this in me. Not that I'm an angel but the love we hold for our kids. LOVED IT!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This was so touching. Sometimes I miss my mother so much and wish I could tell her as well as you have here, how much she meant to me. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Watcher, I am a collector of angels in words and images. This is the best I have ever seen and what a beautiful dedication to your mother. Beautifully done! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Almost all our misfortunes in life come from the wrong notions we have about the things that happen to us. >Stendhal |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful tribute, indeed! ------------------ Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
There is no quicker way to understanding a person than to listen to him/her talk about loving parents, if they were fortunate enough to have them. And those of us who did have wonderful parents, like your mother, when we share memories we hold dear, it touches their hearts with what is special about living immersed in a treasured memory to be. wd watcher and ty for sharing so well! excelsior, HA |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well done oh lurker of the shadows! I really liked how you used allusion here to mislead, then bring it together at the end! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful tribute... well done! |
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Trynete Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35Cape Cod, MA |
Ohhhh :*) how sweet, I think you should print the poem out, and place it on her grave, she would have liked this poem. I'm sorry for your loss. EXCELLENT job. |
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DarkKnight Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 12 |
Moving in a tender way, words so softly sweetly said; A misty eyed tribute to an angel of yours, A thanks for the hand that once led. A word of comfort from a world apart - One cannot lose what is kept in the heart. ------------------ She walks in silence and waits in shadow. She is my lady and my angel. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed, Watch.... Parents certainly deserve more reverence from us... Nice job.. |
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jennysbeau1 Junior Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 10Cornelius, Oregon, USA |
Beautiful...what a tribute motherhood...I really engoyed it....exellent!! |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Watcher this was very beautiful. To quote a movie "The Crow"..... "Mother is the name for god on the lips and hearts of all children." All I can say is WOW.....WOW.....WOW ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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daphna New Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 4 |
Oh Watcher, this is perfect. I lost my mother to cancer in May and have been in too much pain to write about it. I will read this again and again. No torture for me in your words! |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
This is very good...I like it alot watcher Dread |
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