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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
I used to feel the sun that shined, the wind that blew, the peace of mine. But instead I only wait, I watch the time, Just pass away. I only feel the dead inside, the pain just sits, the memories blind. What can I do to look and see the beauty I once had seen? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
 So sad...tis well written, tulip - I hope you find that beauty soon. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Severn, It's hard when you know the beauty that's out there, but you don't have it!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
this is very nice Tulip, but also very sad. well done  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Tulip! ------------------ Denise |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
dsnyder & dark angel, Thanks for your input... |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done....look for the beauty inside,then the outside becomes clear. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I like the wisdom in Watcher's reply. Good piece tulip...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tulip, Enjoyed the read, well done. |
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dave appleby New Member
since 1999-10-21
Posts 5manchester, england |
tulip i think your write well and pass the meaning fluently, maybe if you let everything go then more will come back than if you just hold on to what you know |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Hey All- In looking around me, I feel so "un-innocent" in comparison to the people that surround me. I guess it's just a matter of perception. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tulip...this is well written and nicely stated. I'm glad you shared |
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