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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin 
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Listening to my heart beat The feeling of loneliness Skipping a beat every once and awhile Something is missing Looking , searching Somewhere out there Is the missing piece My soulmate The one love of my life Will I ever find him As the sun comes up A new day starts A day like any other But fate plays apart It always has even at the start |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
You will find him...when you least expect it!!  I enjoyed this very much.Jenny |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
When you least expect him, there he'll be.Lovely verse! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Thanks Jenny and watcher but I already have him in my life. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Congrats... on a great poem AND having that soulmate! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nicely done!  ------------------ Denise |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Well, I had this whole response planned out about how you should wait for a soulmate to find yuio instead of searching everyday....but as you already have one I see my advice is uneeded. You must've done sumthin' right. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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