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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-04 07:44 PM


Quiet Fall


There is a quietness
in the fall
and one really
has to listen
to hear it.
Most wait until
deep in winter
and think
they hear it,
but that is winter's sleep-
a silence-
and not the stillness
of which I speak.
The sound I hear
is of leaves
changing colors….
the most beautiful
quiet in nature.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-04 08:14 PM


I know that quietness of which you speak!

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Denise

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 1999-10-04 08:33 PM


I knew you would!!! Will anyone else know it??

RB

:-}

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-10-04 08:50 PM


I too believe that I know that quietness..what a magical time of year, don't you think? I love it, and your poem.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller




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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL
4 posted 1999-10-04 09:26 PM


yes..I think many know of this quiet...it is a special time of year. Very poetic.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 253

5 posted 1999-10-04 11:34 PM


Robert..yet again you have surprised me! How have I missed you? I really like your style! Keep it up!(I wrote a poem called "To Drink the Wind" about riding my horse in the fall.)
~eagerly scrolling down the list for yet another RobertB poem~
*smiles*
Izzy

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-10-05 08:35 AM


Very nicely done

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 1999-10-05 10:11 AM


RobertB,
Well done enjoyed the read.

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