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I Know This Well, I've Been Here Before (Echo's challenge)
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I Know This Well, I've Been Here Before (Echo's challenge) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 I know this well, I've been here before. Walking with you along this shore As the waves crashed upon the sand I ran to you to catch your hand The footprints that we left behind Now washed away, can't be defined Like memories not often thought I'm left alone and feeling naught I'm watching now the sun go down With it, in my tears I drown Wishing you were here with me That once again we were carefree I know this well, I've been here before I remember when we walked the shore Now your gone, I'm sitting alone Listening to the ocean drone |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is simply wonderful, WhtDove! Beautiful!  ------------------ Denise |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is beautiful....but the end has me ready to cry again...I just saw the Sixth Sense, and the end of your poem, like the end of the movie, is heartbreaking. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sad,but so beautiful. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks so much Denise! Always appreciated! S.D. I have seen that movie. The end was fantastic, how it all came together. I enjoyed that one too! Thanks for your wonderul comment! Watcher thanks much! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sigh...so sad...and beautiful. : ) |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
This is a great poem. So sad but I love it. It is the first thing I read tonight and it fit my mood perfectly. What a beautiful poem ! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful WhtDove...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhtDove, Just fly above the memory shore And it will stay forever more. Beautiful poem. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Munda with much thanks to you! JenifferM glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and replying! Though I hope the "mood" will pass soon for you! Pepper thanks so much! Thanks Seymour! The memory shore, good one Sey! Though it kind of fits me (this poem) but came out of that thing that we call our imagination. hehe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
White Dove ... very pretty indeed. Senic and touching. The footprints washed from the shore, live in your heart forevermore. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Marge! They certainly do stay in the heart don't they?! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove,This is absolutley beautiful girl! Loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful WhtDove, why do we torture ourselves though? Wish someone could answer that one for me? (HUGS) ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you and me both |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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