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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-06 06:29 PM


I'm missing you so much,
I've been thinking of you,
Won't you take a holiday,
And come to see me someday
I'll be happy to see you,
But it 's seems like
I've been thinking of you,
I don't have any idea,
Whether you've been thinking of me,
I'm too far to hold you,
I'm too far to tell you
I love you,
Are you happy without me,
I wonder iif you have another love,
There been no news
About you lately,
I was thinking about you,
I wonder If,
You're thinking of me

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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-06 06:48 PM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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2 posted 1999-11-06 10:57 PM


It is so sad......

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2004-04-25 08:48 PM


kinda sad
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