»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #3
»
I think
| Open Poetry #3 |
|
I think |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
I think Here I lie within my bed, Phrases flying through my head. Half in wake and half in dream, Siphoning my dreamers stream, Desperate to stay their shed. Some are plain and some are mean And some like angels seem. But I cannot judge them all And some I cannot recall, My best is but half a gleam. I try to stay, hold at bay, The awaking of day. I need but a little more, To fulfill the need of store. But it seems they will not stay. I think that I must leave this mode, For if I don't, I will explode. |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Seymour! I enjoyed this muchly!  ------------------ Denise |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Looks like we're on the same wavelength tonight. Sweet dreams. |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I always enjoy your poetry. The words whirl in my head at night too. I wish you technocolor dreams to write about in the morning or many fond remembrances of things past. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done Seymore, but I expect nothing else when I open one of your poems ------------------ Alis volat propriis |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Muchly that's good thank you so much Denise. Sunshine, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Martie, Technocolor dreams, that would be nice, thanks. Hoot, It's always nice to read one of your comments thank you. |
||
|
Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher, Thank you for the enjoy. |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Boy Seymour can I relate to this one! I go to bed and find myself trying to ryhme my prayers. heeh good one! |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I keep a notebook by my bed For words that whirl 'round in my head As I try to drift off to sleep. (A great rhyme lost can make one weep!) And the pages don't stay white For if I get up in the night That spiral's bound to pierce my foot... No words, just bloodstains, in that book! Great job, Seymour! |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhtDove, I see I am not alone in poetic actions. Suthern, I can relate to that, I often go into the kitchen and open the micro wave for that little light. I don't want to wake anyone. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||