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Pleasure and Pain
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Pleasure and Pain |
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Thought New Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 3Detroit, MI, USA |
As that feeling hits your nerves, then goes straight to your heart, Except it at face value, but never forget what you have part. When your eyes light up, at the sight of such wonders, Think of what it took to get there, through all the mistakes and blunders. When you hold your child so close, as if for the first time, You remember all the years of work to help them be their prime. And when you think of the loved ones no longer here with you, Hold dear all the memories shared, not just in joy, but in sorrow too. In life, mind, and spirit, a balance of both ends, it does feel, Is needed, not for sake of peace or prosperity, but to simply hold together all that seems real. To have one, is to bring on the other, as the tide shifts between loss and gain. A fact of Nature not rivaled is the law of Pleasure and Pain. ------------------ jmd1980@collegeclub.com http://welcome.to/DickBros quote: |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I find these words very well thought out I enjoyed the read very well done! thinking!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much!!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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