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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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0 posted 1999-11-01 12:24 PM


I know a special person
She really is quite sweet.
Even with her problems
She never shows defeat.

Her mind seems to stay focused
On what is positive.
Donation of a liver
And a pancreas to live.

I know she has her bad days
I fully understand.
Though I often pray for her
I leave her in God's hand.

What she must be going through
Is hard to comprehend.
The problems that she faces
Her attitude transcends.

Always with a smile
And spreading her good cheer.
She has become my friend
I'll always hold her dear.

She's someone that I value
And love to be around.
I'm glad our paths have crossed
And this friendship has been found.

May God always watch you
From His spot above,
Keep you safe and happy
And always in His love!

Tori, I know God is always watching over you. You amaze me with your attitude at life!
You're very special to me and I love ya. I'm glad we have become friends.

© Copyright 1999 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-11-01 12:32 PM


What a lovely reminder that she is loved. *S*
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-11-01 12:49 PM


A very touching tribute to your friend WhtDove.....Know that she will be in my prayers too........

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
3 posted 1999-11-01 12:53 PM


Awe... this is such an honor you have given me.. and I am eternity grateful that we have crossed path's in this fast cyber world .. who da thunk it..... lol
I look forward to a long friendship that I'll hold dear.. lots of laughs too...
By the way I woke five people up with that Joke .... it made them laugh....:-) me too ... almost could not get it out..lol
Just spreading the joy of the Dove..
Thank you so much my friend.. you are such a precious work of art, what we have in life is wonderful when there are people like you to share it with... I look forward to sharing with you.
Smoochies and love from the heart to you always..

[This message has been edited by tori (edited 11-01-1999).]

WhtDove
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Illinois
4 posted 1999-11-01 02:18 PM


She is loved Suthern! Thanks

Thank you Pepper as always! Please do keep her in your prayers.

Tori, you bring tears to my eyes too! Work of art though? I think that's pushin it. LOL
Glad to hear you did wake them up with that! LOL You really crack me up!
Love ya girl!

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-02 05:14 AM


Lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 1999-11-02 06:06 AM


Beautiful !!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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7 posted 1999-11-02 08:16 AM


Watcher...D.A. It's for a great person! Thanks
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 1999-11-02 08:27 AM


WhtDove,
What can be nicer than a WhtDove that can write like you. Loved the poem.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
9 posted 1999-11-02 09:31 AM


What a nice tribute to a wonderful and courageous person
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
10 posted 1999-11-02 10:14 AM


What a compliment you pay me Seymour! Much thankfulness to you!

Hoot thank you! She is courageous. Uplifting and just wonderful!

tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
11 posted 1999-11-02 12:27 PM


See Dove I was not pushing it at all, you've only to look at the responces you've got to know its true... a work of art... you are!!
I woudl also like to thank everyone for their kind responces.. Peace to all..
And thanks Hoot... spoken from one who know's the way the road leads... thnaks Hoot

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
12 posted 1999-11-02 01:16 PM


Thanks Tori, I just don't see myself that way. But, I will curtsie with much thanks. (Trust me I'm not one that does that often!)

Thank you all so very much, especially you Tori!

Mysteria
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13 posted 2004-12-15 03:21 PM


Wow my granddaugther's name is Tori too!  What a lovely sentiment to a friend in this poem.
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