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A Rose in The Garden (please Read...comments Welcome)
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A Rose in The Garden (please Read...comments Welcome) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Who outshined all the other flowers in th [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 10-09-1999).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh, wow, Romantic Heart! This is just so powerful-all the way through, but especially the last few lines. Beautiful. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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toocute4u_27 Junior Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 26Holdenville, OK USA |
this is very touching, especially if your heart has been broken lately. Beautiful work. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for your comments Elizabeth and tocute4u! Yes my heart has been broken  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am sorry if I offended anyone by putting please read on my poem! I was going to enter it in a contest and needed responses to see if It was good enough...thisis the only poem I had put this title(Please Read)...sorry..and also I just get into a poetic mood to write and reading others poems on here inspires the flow of creativity...so If I have posted too many poems...I am sorry! I was just going with the flow! I am new at this! Please forgive me!  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is truly very deep. I sympathize whole-heartedly. I think you should enter this in the contest, it is great!! ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Wonderful, it brought a tear to my eye. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
yes I too think you should enter this piece......it is a winner...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for the support and for the advice, Now That great poets have viewed it I feel at ease to enter it! Thanks you guys! |
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