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devina
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0 posted 1999-10-28 12:59 PM


HOW SWEET YOUR VOICE SEEMS IN THE DARK,
HOW SWEET YOU ARE TO LOVE ME, LOVE.
YET DAYBREAK COMES-
AND WE GO OUR SEPERATE WAYS.
WITH BITTER WORDS-
THE SWEETNESS DRAINS AWAY.

WHY CAN'T YOUR SMILE FOREVER SHINE-
WHEN YOUR EYES GAZE DOWN ON MINE?
ARE YOU TIRING OF MY LOVE?
ARE YOU TIRING OF ME, LOVE?

OF YOUR SWEETNESS, I'LL NEVER TIRE,
YET EMERGING FROM INSIDE,
IS SOMETHING I FEAR-
YOU DON'T WANT ME ANYMORE,
MY LOVE IS NOT ENOUGH,
AND YOURS IS NO MORE.

DON'T PULL AWAY FROM MY GLANCE,
FACE MY EYES TO YOURS,
AND TELL MY LIPS IN TRUTH-
IS FOREVER GROWING OLD-
CAUSING YOU TO BE CRUEL?
OR AM I IN THE WRONG-
IS IT JUST A LOVERS QUARREL?
MY LOVE I NEED YOU ALWAYS,
SO TELL ME-
FOR THEN MY DOUBTS WILL SPILL AWAY.

© Copyright 1999 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 1999-10-28 01:26 AM


Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

devina
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2 posted 1999-10-28 05:08 PM


thanks for your opinion. i'm glad you enjoyed this little peice of my life.
devina
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3 posted 1999-10-28 07:09 PM


thanks for your opinion. i'm glad you enjoyed this little peice of my life.
Daddy Goose38
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4 posted 2015-05-23 12:57 PM


Awwwwwwwwwwww ... how comforting.

devina
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Cali
5 posted 2015-05-24 06:16 AM


Wow...old stuff here...yrs & yrs. lol
thx  Jaime!
be well
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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