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Enrique
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 52
San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-05 03:08 PM


The night whispers
and I alone hear
the voice of a woman
so soft, so clear

I feel her body
lying next to me
It's only then
that my soul is free

We soar through the heavens
Two souls in flight
There's no end to our journey
'til the end of night

For things aren't always
as they seem
Our journey together
confined to a dream

Dreams of beauty
and loving bliss
Enchanting me with her eyes
A passionate kiss

Organic Rythems
Nothing undone
Bodies flailing
Hearts beating as one

Melted together
all things right
Held you in my arms
til the end of night

For things aren't always
quite like it seems
My love for a woman
Confined to dreams.

- Enrique


© Copyright 1999 Enrique - All Rights Reserved
sea_of_okc
Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-07-06 09:50 AM


Welcome Enrique! I like this one alot, it flows well has good rhyme and meter. (not to be picky but it is spelled rhythms)
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