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chris Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 29rowlett, texas, usa |
Pa Pa is just a man in other people's eyes but to us he's a tower strength surpassing size with a love of the Lord that will never die He comforts out tears and questions of why a man that can fall like everyone else but putting others first giving of himself spreading the Word and caring for souls walks past the fire and tends to the coals the soul will pass to a better place but his heart lives on in the tears we trace sadness fades and the love still lives a caring heart was all he could give a husband, a father and granddad to me always there to help us see this man will never become a memory 'cause part of his heart will live in me i miss you pa pa, chris |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
A beautiful tribute to a man you truely love. |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
Well done, Chris! This is beautiful... ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
You know, I regret that my Grandfather never had the opportunity to share in my "passion" for poetry. Yours surely would be proud. Nicely done, Chris. |
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Delilah Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 36The Wonderful America |
THis poem was amazing!!! Truly a beautiful work that expresses your emotions in every way. I loved it and always keep writing!!!! ------------------ Delilah :) |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
your poem made me long for something i never experienced, thank you for sharing  ------------------ i never call a poem "nice" or such, for that would not be saying much |
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