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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA 
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Have you ever walked where angels tread? have you ever heard what an angel's said? Have you ever seen an angel bled? Have you ever touched an angel's head? Have you ever seen an angel's wings? Have you ever heard an angel sing? Have you ever saw an angel leave? Have you ever known an angel to disbelieve? Have you ever seen a demon's brow? Have you ever heard a demon scowl? Have you ever asked a demon how? Have you ever told a demon "NOW!!"? Have you ever seen a demon fall? Have you ever heard a demon call? Have you ever seen a demon crawl? Have you ever heard of a demon nailed to a wall? Have you ever sat upon a fence? Have you ever pondered recompence? Have you ever been a misfit? Have you ever felt like counterfeit? Have you ever been stuck in a phone booth? Have you ever squandered away your youth? Have you ever felt like you would always lose? Have you ever just looked into the eyes of truth? |
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Alysia Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35american falls, idaho usa |
my mind races at all of the questions that i so closely relate to. fabulous...enough said. ------------------ ~ Alysia* |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Amazing …..I was impressed when I read it, each line forced me to read the next lines faster and faster I don’t know if this was your intention (I hope it was) but it works beautifully. |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
hey Craig, thanx for your comment. I didn't think anyone would be able to get this poem or understand. Yet, you got it. Nice to know when you go out on a limb with a piece of work that someone appreciates it. Jfreak |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
ONE WORD FOR U JFREAK! WOW WOW WOW WOW I have never read a poem with such a deep meaning, It really made me think thank you for posting it! *******Augchic711******* |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
your so very welcome Augchic. Thank you for reading and posting. Jfreak |
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