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Wintersurfer
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 16


0 posted 1999-06-25 09:48 PM


How much do ah luv yew?
Its kinda hard to say
If ah had to find the words
It might just take all day...

I luv yew as much as ants in a hill
As much and as far as air goes.
As much as the pennies in a million dollar bill,
And as much as the hairs in your nose.

I luv yew as much as the ocean is deep
as high as them mountains do grow
More than the going to sleep sheep
More than the grass blades I mow.

I luv yew more than the bubbles in beer
More than termites in a log.
I luv yew just a whole darn bunch dear...
And I also luv yer dog.

vfw
6-23-99

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JANNA
Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 51
arlington, tx usa
1 posted 1999-06-25 09:50 PM


light hearted, very cute
Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-06-25 09:59 PM


more than bubbles in beer? More than the hairs in your nose? Give this man the Pulitzer Prize!
Joyfulltune
Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 12

3 posted 1999-06-25 10:35 PM


How sweet! I imagine a hallmark card with a hickabilly in overalls on the cover.
Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
4 posted 1999-06-25 10:39 PM


hee hee..
Now, that was just "dern right funny"
I also luv yer poem.

[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 06-25-99).]

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-06-25 11:47 PM


I love it when you talk sweet like that
but you didn't promise to luv my cat!
Ifen yer heart can't open to her
yer not going to ever hear ME purr!

Cute, original and very creative. I liked yer poem a lot!



elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
6 posted 1999-07-19 08:49 PM


thanks for the chuckle...loved the line "As much as the pennies in a million dollar bill"...hope you are still posting?

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Rita
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540
7 posted 1999-07-19 09:00 PM


really really cute and sweet
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