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evolution
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-06-25 12:01 PM


this night i always remember
that night, it all started then
one rogue kiss
all my innocence gone
our sweat blended in the heat of our passion
your lips were sweet, like ecstasy
when i tasted you, i tasted life
wanting no more than you
never enough of you
your hair
oh your hair
i could hide in its scent
it smelled like the dreams
all the dreams id had of this moment
the precursor
this was it, life was in this moment
the world melted away
the dream all that was left, all that was real
turning for you
burning for you
i love you
i do


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Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-06-25 01:26 AM


Well Evolution you definitely have captured true love in your work here! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work with me good luck with future work and hope to read more from you

*******Augchic711*******

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