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evolution
Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-06-24 10:54 PM


i remember the last few moments
the last few moments of us
clinging to each second
i knew when you were gone that you were gone
us was over
so inconceivable
this was forever
can forever be now
shrouded by disbelief
i ignore the inevitable
i say what you want to hear
i am what you want
unable to understand
i nod, i agree, i die
everything was us
until us said goodbye

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Genea
Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
1 posted 1999-06-24 11:18 PM


evolution,

very sad tone to this one, and a bit hopeless.

~Genea

Tibesti
New Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 6
New York, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-06-24 11:52 PM


"i say what you want to hear" nice; so often roles reverse.
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