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sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
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Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-08-25 09:05 AM


You've been gone so very long
I've come to take you home
I feel you coming closer now
Across the skies you roam

I watch your plane touching down
A teardrop in my eye
A thrill of joy runs through my soul
You soon will be nearby

I see you walking up the ramp
I've missed you very much
My arms out wide to hold you
To feel your loving touch

As you run to my embrace
I kiss you eagerly
My love is stronger every time
That you return to me


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Steven Seaman
A burden shared is a burden lightened
A life shared is a life enriched



[This message has been edited by sea_of_okc (edited 08-25-99).]

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traveler
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since 1999-08-17
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1 posted 1999-08-25 09:18 AM


Nicely done, nice contrast to the "airport goodbye" ... physical absence doesn't change emotional commitment for some ... thanks for your prose

[This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-25-99).]

Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-08-25 09:22 AM


Wonderful! You don't post often enough though!

Elizabeth
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3 posted 1999-08-25 07:56 PM


Did you mean this as a sequel to "Airport Goodbyes"? I think this one is great!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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4 posted 1999-08-25 10:01 PM


'tis a lovely thing, this...I enjoyed it, and it is a sweet response to Airport Goodbyes.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
5 posted 1999-10-20 10:02 AM


Ah....OKC, somehow this passed me by....I read this and loved the warmth I felt....Great job in making that feeling come alive again..."I see you walking up the ramp..." LOVELY piece....me likes! Where've you been, by the way?

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-04-17 01:40 PM


thanks for a memory
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