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Open Poetry #1

Angel Eyes

TOOTSIPOPTOP
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since 1999-08-24

Posts 3
GREENBRIAR, ARKANSAS

0 posted 1999-08-24 01:06 AM

"ANGEL EYES"

BY: J. R. BERRY

STOP BY TO CHAT A WHILE, KIND SIR !!!
AND PLEASE TO LEND YOUR EAR.
I'LL TELL YOU OF MY SPECIAL GIRL.
THE ONE I LOVE SO DEAR !!!

I MET HER IN THE SPRINGTIME !!!
T'WAS ROUND THE FIRST OF MAY.
SHE WAS DANCING IN THE MEADOW.
WHERE THE DEER AND CATTLE LAY !!!

I SAW HER BY THE WATERFALLS !!!
AND WATCHED WITH SHEER DELIGHT.
AS SHE FROLICKED IN THE WATER.
AND STAYED THERE TILL THE NIGHT !!!

I NEVER LEARNED THE LADYS NAME !!!
I NEVER HELD HER HAND.
OR LOOKED INTO HER LOVELY EYES.
TO MAKE HER UNDERSTAND !!!

I NEVER KISSED HER RUBY LIPS !!!
OR HELD HER CLOSE AND TIGHT.
FOR IN MY EYES SHE WAS THE BEST.
AND SUCH A WONDROUS SIGHT !!!

I PUT HER ON A PEDESTAL !!!
SUCH BEAUTY AND SUCH GRACE.
TO LIVE THERE IN MY DREAMS A WHILE.
AND NEVER BE REPLACED !!!

NOW TIME HAS COME, AND TIME HAS PASSED !!!
AND MUCH TO MY SURPRISE.
I FIND MYSELF WITH HUNGERED THOUGHTS.
OF DARLING "ANGEL EYES" !!!

YOU'LL KNOW THIS WHEN I TELL YOU, SIR !!!
FOR YOU HAVE THE KINDEST HEART.
I KNEW IT IN AN INSTANT.
OUR SOULS WOULD NEVER PART !!!

THANKS AGAIN, KIND SIR !!!
FOR LENDING ME YOUR EAR.
AND PARDON ME, IF YOU WILL.
I'LL SHED ANOTHER TEAR !!!

YOU SEE SIR !!! SHE HAD IT ALL FOR ME !!!
AND NEVER TOLD ME LIES.
SHE LIVES WITHIN MY HEART AND DREAMS.
MY DARLING "ANGEL EYES" !!!

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J. R. BERRY

[This message has been edited by TOOTSIPOPTOP (edited 08-25-99).]

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-08-24 08:07 AM

Welcome. Are you J.R. Berry? If so, the poem was good, if not, who is J.R. Berry? Just one suggestion though with all capital letters, it's a little hard to read.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-08-24 08:19 AM

Berry,
Welcome aboard, enjoyed the read.

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