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Open Poetry #1

No Other Man

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-08-16 08:55 AM

No Other Man

The rays of sun
illuminated,
captured
upon your delicate
smooth face.

The soft innocence
crying,
yearning
to be caressed
with gentle fingertips.

A kiss given
tenderly,
lovingly
to your soft,
sweet lips.

No other man
could,
would,
delight me
as much as you.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-08-16 10:30 AM

Lovely. Simply told it makes a powerful statement!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 1999-08-16 11:34 AM

Thank You ever so much, Poet deVine. I just wrote this, this morning, so my husband has not been given an eye shot of it yet.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-08-16 08:14 PM

....makes me smile

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-08-16 08:21 PM

I found this piece soft, delicate,
and touching.

Nicely done.

Michael

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 1999-08-16 08:37 PM

Your hubby may not have seen the poem, but I'm sure he knows the feelings behind it. Lucky fellow.

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

6 posted 1999-08-17 10:30 AM

Nan: Smiles are good, glad you liked it.

Michael: Thank-you, very much.

Balladeer: A giant smile appeared upon his face, while reading this. Thanks for your kind words.

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