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Kingdom Of Passions |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Kingdom Of Passions Far away in a land where only fingers, and mouses can transport, lies a kingdom of passions. The largest, brightest place one could ever imagine, where etchings on the walls are created by the royal King, Queen, Princes, and Princesses of the kingdom. Let me introduce you to Ron, our crowned King. Seated beside his majesty is the crowned Queen Nan. They tend to all the aches, and pains of all that abide within the kingdom of passions. Amongst the acres of land in this large, bright place there march many knights in shinning armor. Their words be their swords as they tear juice from your eyes, or as they gently caress a smile to your face. Some use their swords to shave you to the ground in hilarious laughter. Welcome to the kingdom of passions where minds come together to share their inner most thoughts, dreams, and humor. Where everyone becomes enlightened through the talents of others. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
WOW! Well done !!!  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dragoness: Thank You for your compliment it's much appreciated. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
It's just a game of chess and I am but a pawn. It's nothing more or less -- our words a drawbridge drawn to bring the castle Truth and echoes of our mind. A Passions game of chess, with stanzas, verse, and rhyme. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Great poem! But does this mean we all have to curtsey to Ron and Nan? I better start practicing so I don't fall on my ..face. Seriously, I loved the line about everyone being enlightened through the talents of the others...that is certainly true! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A regal court's poetic match White's Bishop Balladeer, deVine, DreamEvil's foe to catch Ne'er Rook Green Polar Bear - Thence Isabelle and Alicat O'ersee the game a-Skye As fearless pawns move en passant In Peri-lous advance on by... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This pawn comes passing by with verse, one small square at a time. Then wayout rook and dr'evil knight attack with poems sublime. Black knight asserts advancing threat, White bishop Tim eschews the cheque from angled distance, yet the Sunshine rook ensues. This Passion chess is quizzical, amusing, yet intense. Next move for pawn, a physical PERI-meter offense. [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 08-14-99).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this is getting interesting, What did I create. I never imagined this angle when I wrote this. Here's to enjoying the additions. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Medieval knights we have, for sure, And damsels in distress While lords and dukes and duchesses Parade in royal dress. So bring your friends and visit us Partake of what we've got. Enjoy our humble offerings and We hope you comealot. |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Camelot... a legend of golden days... we have a modern Camelot right here at netpoets! ~Salutes at Ron~ ~Bows to Nan~ and your other knights and damsels, tell them a-hoy, and hi, from Artur! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
in this lovely kingdom, i'm but a serving wench you see if you need another ale, don't hesitate to call on me  |
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