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INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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Indiana, USA

0 posted 1999-08-13 03:59 PM


Black and white on blue
Manta ray on silent wing
Soaring in the deep

© Copyright 1999 KKunnen - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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California
1 posted 1999-08-14 04:32 PM


happy haiku to you, INclan
thursdayschild
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since 1999-07-01
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Houston, Tx.
2 posted 1999-08-14 04:39 PM


Lovely haiku.

Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
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USA
3 posted 1999-08-14 06:33 PM


As free-flowing as a manta ray.
INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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Indiana, USA
4 posted 1999-08-21 09:03 PM


Thank you to all who responded. I have been away fishing with the family.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 1999-08-21 09:47 PM


INclan,
Good haiku. you know manta ray is good eating.

Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-08-21 10:38 PM


Haikus are not as easy as you make them seem. Good work.
INclan
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7 posted 1999-08-22 12:01 PM


I was not aware that Manta ray were eaten.

Thank you, Balladeer, from you that is high praise.

INclan

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 1999-08-22 08:59 AM


Ah...I do believe he's got it!!! Nicely done Inclan...haiku at it's finest

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 1999-08-22 10:02 AM


INclan,
Yes I used to spear fish years ago and if I cought a good size ray I would cut the wings
and scalop them and have a block party.
You could get about 20lbs of scalop off each wing.

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