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fjones
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since 1999-06-07
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0 posted 1999-06-20 03:22 PM


My child, you are separated from me.
We’re disconnected only for a moment.
I will soon come to you.
If only I could see through the mist.

You lingered and said goodbye.
Allowing for many lasting memories.
Oh why did you have to die?
Still you seem to be in our midst.


[This message has been edited by fjones (edited 06-20-99).]

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SweetLittlePoet
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since 1999-06-20
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1 posted 1999-06-20 05:59 PM


This is a beautiful poem. It is true that sometimes things happen, there is nothing we can do about them.

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Nettie Bell

milt
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 18
whitley city ky usa
2 posted 1999-06-20 06:20 PM


good words
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