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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-08 02:41 PM


Low down

Blues, like remora on a host
Lays just beyond in the shadow.
Holds and clings like chains of a ghost.
Like a phantom of the morrow.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-08-08 02:49 PM


...and the shark becomes the prey.... Nice job, Sy... as usual...

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-08-99).]

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-20 04:46 PM


again , it is very good. beautiful.
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-10 09:41 PM


enjoyed

ACRTIC WIND

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