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Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

0 posted 1999-08-07 06:02 PM

Darkness is where the shadows are, deep
in thought, deep in mind, lost within
a shadows scar.
Those believe, and believe in faith, until
they see the demon without a face.
In a room where all is black, no shadows,
no light, no wall to your back.
You see in the corner what you think is real,
until you grasp what is revealed.
Sensations rush where your eyes don't see,
this creature has shadowed your eyes
to thee.
From the darkness you feel it touch your skin, in the darkness cold, the touch
of sin.
Mistaken to what you thought was true,
pain surrounds what once you knew.
Deep yet shallow you feel it move,
past your soul, past your skin, once
old is new.
Withdraw your screams you hold inside,
To show yours true will hurt your pride.
The sounds you hear go on and on,
Once was screams, once death now song.
Close thy eyes and believe what is true,
Speak right, speak faithful,
know I, as I you.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..

Darquewing
Junior Member

since 1999-07-30

Posts 20

1 posted 1999-08-07 06:44 PM

Very darque Capulet.... I like the way you draw the reader into the piece with the fast intro... Suck'em in and hit' em.. Okay not the most poetic way to put it, but I really like it. It's good to know that others can write in the darque.

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KEEP THE DARQUENESS ALIVE!
Darquewing

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-08-07 09:10 PM

Ah! Darkness my favorite subject! Very well done!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Capulet[R+J]
Junior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 41
Calgary,Alberta Canada

3 posted 1999-08-07 11:23 PM

Thanks!

Sometimes I just get into
that wierd mood (usually during a thunder storm)
and just shpeel out one of these down on
paper.

I kinda like the darker theme
sometimes, VS the usuall depression, and
love. I guess it just depends on my mood.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-08-07 11:25 PM

Extremely dark, wonderful piece!! You have talent, Capulet!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

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