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tori
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since 1999-06-18
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-06-20 01:58 PM


He has gone, he's in hiding , hiding from his shame
The shame of not conceding that he has to bear some blame
Accepting of the wisdom and knowing of the truths
He has chosen hiding, just like in his youth
He visits the ocean on ships that barely float
Feels the water calling, with the words stuck in his throat,
No,no, no, and back down they go,
To a place with in he shall never know
Watch that water flowing, feeling its pull
Knowing she is out there, and there is nothing he can do
Stuck here in his hiding just like in his youth
Torn with temper rising feeling like a fool
Just wont take on the plight, it is against his rule
Admitting to his wrongs is something he can't do
A lonely man awakens only to the day
Of finding he's mistaken, and
Love has gone her way

Copywrite toi 1999
Hiding is in the process of being published :-)

© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 1999-07-14 11:55 AM


congrats on the publishing of this fine work its irony i love well worth gracing a volume of poetry
~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
2 posted 1999-07-14 12:28 PM


Yes, Tori! Congratualtions of this one getting published! That's so cool! This piece is well-deserving of it!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*


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