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Open Poetry #1

where is it?

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-08-03 08:38 PM

I would cross the ocean
swim the longest river known
climb the highest mountain
to get there

I would crawl down on my knees
if only one day I could reach
the place I know exists
in my mind

I know it's there, I've seen it
I know it's there, I feel it
if somehow I could reach it
but maybe I'm too scared

I don't wanna live without it
and there's no doubt about it
I'll find it where I least expect it
and I won't be alone

when I reach home

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Kay-lynn

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-08-03 08:44 PM

I like it! You have a way with words.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-03 08:48 PM

I like the message behind this poem!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

3 posted 1999-08-03 08:48 PM

wow.. thanks.. encouraging words from a writer...thanks..

graham
Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 60
South Yorkshire, England

4 posted 1999-08-05 10:28 AM

Wow...I really, really like this.
I hope you aren't alone when you get home.

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