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Prayer to the Moon |
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Valor~ Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 10 |
Find for me a place to rest my soul. Let the ocean crash upon my feet. With your forces, guide me with your light. Give me strength n’er to admit defeat. Find me peace within myself, love. Find someone who will need me badly... Let me mend his aching heart and mind. Don’t let us sit apart so sadly. Luna, let us drink the brandywine, and make sweet love till we can no more. Blanket your ocean down around us, Crashing your waves upon the sweet shore. Mezmorize us with your light and love. Let our hearts melt together as one. Take from us those evil dreams and pain. Let our love continue through the sun. Luna, let us find what we deserve. Let your moonlight shine down around me. Give me strength to find my destined one, and shine your light so he may find me. ©1999 Valor~ ------------------ Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Valor....welcome, what a wonderful piece of work, anxiously awaiting more from you. |
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Valor~ Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 10 |
Thank you very much! I am glad I've found a place where I can share such similar interests and emotions!  ------------------ Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful." |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Valor, this is very beautiful. I love the moon...well, the night time in general. Anyway, keep up the great work, I'll be looking for more! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Valor~ Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 10 |
Thank you, Alwye! ------------------ Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful." |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Very beautiful! Excellent work! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Moved even this dead heart, well done. I look forward to more. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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