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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
God, I wish I could go back to being what I was. Cutting no one any slack and hurting them, "Because." I want to carve out this heart and toss it to the dogs. Peel this pain back to the start and go to sawing logs. Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
You can't go back...what was there is now gone....you can only go forward and met each new challenge knowing how much stronger you've gotten.I'll be right behind you....always! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
please dont go back Dream.. you are too special to go back.. *hugs* ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Valor~ Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 10 |
DreamEvil, you write with such emotion. I love your work. I am looking forward to reading more of it! ------------------ Valor~ "Poetry is language as it is most distilled and most powerful." |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Hahaha.. At times I feel the same.. Right now as a matter of fact.. I love this piece.. Can I add it to my collection? Love, Lady Love is not blind, it sees more not less; but because it sees more it is willing to see less. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Powerful, full of emotion.... Please don't toss that wonderful heart! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
No, definitely don't toss out that wonderful heart. And never go back, its in the past, leave it there. An emotional piece, Dream, and very well done. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
You CAN'T toss your heart! That is where these beautiful words come from!  Besides, that heart of yours is a gift from the Angels!------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I appreciate the concern you all feel. It is returned. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I feel this way often dream, it is hard to feel everyones pain as well as your own. I guess that's what happens when one cares too much...but considering the alternative, I'll stick to this one!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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