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Fred Hobbs
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0 posted 1999-07-30 09:20 PM


There is one forest I know well
all damp and dark and magical
with fairy rings and little folk
and unicorns and whisps of smoke
where wizards live and dragons too
and rabbit holes that go right through
the Earth and to the other side
a magic place I go to hide

sandman

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1 posted 1999-07-30 09:30 PM


Can I come along sometime when I need a hiding place? Once again Fred, you have done a fine job! The imagery is excellent. Now where is this magical forest?
Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-07-30 09:33 PM


Hey, Fred!

Welcome back!

This place is always "dragon" without you!

Poet deVine
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3 posted 1999-07-30 09:39 PM


I can smell he peat moss...see the newly sprouted violets...feel the soft piney breeze.. this might be better than a week on vacation! (I liked this poem - I like all your poems!)
elvira
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4 posted 1999-07-31 07:09 AM


oh to be a pixie in that magical forest *sigh*

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Nan
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5 posted 1999-07-31 12:32 PM


Yeppers - I know that place....!!!



Delores Hall
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6 posted 1999-07-31 05:19 PM


That would be nice if I could find a place
like that at times.Happy writing.

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