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Princess Lily
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0 posted 1999-07-26 12:31 PM


The word forever is such a sad thing.
You know those friends that you cherish so much.The one that say they'll be your friends FOREVER.Forever never comes.You know that man at the office.yeah the one you're having an affair with.He says he'll love you FOREVER.Well, forever never comes.You know that woman that you are sleeping with.You know the one that your wife doesn't know about.You whisper in her ear-"it will be like this forever".FOREVER never comes.It is quite sad how just about everyday you hear the word FOREVER.But I guess the really sad thing about it is forever never comes.


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-26-99).]

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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1 posted 1999-07-26 12:36 PM


The word "forever" makes many hearts bitter....
AMEN, preach it sister!! LOL I like it alot.

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Alwye
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In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-07-26 12:37 PM


I agree, forever is a word much to often used and very seldom meant. Great job!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Princess Lily
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3 posted 1999-07-26 12:58 PM


Thank you very much for the replies.It is so often that people say forever.Even I sometimes slip but very seldomly because i know how much it hurts.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
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4 posted 1999-07-26 05:12 AM


The word forever stands among ranks of the most powerful words ever used, when meant as it was meant to be. Good one!
Princess Lily
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5 posted 1999-07-26 02:15 PM


Thank you very much arthur.
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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-26-99).]

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