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auntsh Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 11Saginaw, Tx, USA |
SH !!! Someone's listening, they'll hear every word. I sense them ever closer, flying past like a bird. Maybe we shouldn't say that, for they might even hear The whispers of our hearts and thoughts might be too clear. SH !!! Someone's watching, I fear that they will see I feel them ever closer, darting like a bumble bee. Maybe we shouldn't do this and maybe we should beware, For I know that they are watching, I know that they are there. You ask who I fear, that I should take such pause? For everything I do, I simply say "Because," "Someone's always watching and listening, you see. It's not someone I can name, it IS my inner ME. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I also have an 'inner me' that scolds me quite often and is always watching. Wonderful job!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
well done...an enjoyable read ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...devotion...Master...apart...plain...chat? |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
A beautiful Poem. The last two lines hooked me! |
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auntsh Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 11Saginaw, Tx, USA |
Thank you for your kind remarks. |
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