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Sweet T
Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

0 posted 1999-07-24 07:56 PM



If I were to fall would you catch me?
Or would I just fall to the
ground?
If tomorrow were to be dark
Would you be my light?
If I could fly, would you hold me?
Or would I just fly into the never?
Many times questions are asked, But if there is no love are they answered?
I've cried many
tears
But you weren't there to hear
them
My sadness only seemed to bring you joy
So if all I am is
humor
Why is it that it hurts so bad?
Laughter rocks the highest peak
Yet it seems so shallow right
now
Can I be your forever?
Can I bring you the happiness of Love?
Or am I destined to be
alone?
Will You cry with
Me?
Talk to
me?
Be with
me?
If not then why do I
stay?
Why do I keep putting myself into this situation?
You once said I was a good person.
How have things changed?
Did I do something
wrong?
Did I come at a bad
time?
Or is it that you really do love me
But you're just not ready to accept it?
Please tell
me
I am down on my knee

I want to be able to bring you
life
But that's not possible
If all I do is Bring you
DOWN!

© Copyright 1999 Sweet T - All Rights Reserved
Emmy
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY
1 posted 1999-07-24 08:44 PM


Oh you have put into words what I have been trying so hard to turn into poetry...I haven't come up with a thing! But you've found the perfect way to say it. This was truly written from the heart. Well done.
Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-07-24 11:04 PM


Excellent questions posed here. Nicely thought out. Thanks for sharing.
Sweet T
Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa
3 posted 1999-07-26 11:58 AM


Thank you all for your kind words. It means a lot to have other talented poets appreciate my work.
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