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IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

0 posted 1999-07-23 11:40 PM

I know loving me hasn't been easy
I make your heart beat with passion
then I rip it out
you never know if I am coming or going
and I can't see heads or tails
front or back, start or finish

then, I smile (so naughtily)
as I grab your arms
and kiss you hard

then I feel so cold
my heart closed and quiet
leaving your head spinning
like a whirlpool
your emotions wild
like my thirst for you
(sometimes)
then I come around
asking for more
of your time
more of your love
more of
YOU
and instead of turning
away

you stop and hold me tight
because you know
without a doubt
my love is held firmly
in your arms
even when I feel cold and dead
inside
you wake my heart back up
and gently show me (yet again)
how much I mean to you

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

1 posted 1999-07-24 02:14 AM

*sigh*...you are lucky...seems to be a sound relationship

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

2 posted 1999-07-24 03:36 AM

Isn't it odd how there are us poets who are filled with so much emotion, yet we choose not to show it to anyone other than on paper? Just a thought... Beautiful poem! I love it, as always!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Ron

Administrator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-05-19

Posts 8669
Michigan, US

3 posted 1999-07-24 09:15 AM

Izzy, I think have just defined womanhood. (Boy, am I going to get raked over the coals for that!) And, as always, you have done it with beauty and insight.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-07-24 02:36 PM

Izzy, you may be a mermaid but you'll never be a mere maid! Beautiful words.

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

5 posted 1999-07-25 05:06 PM

Hiya hun *8)
well, ever since you posted this, I've been trying to think of what to put as a reply. I've read your poem over and over, and really there isn't anything I can say that you didn't say already. I'm biased, so I'll say it's lovely anyway *shrug* but it is! I'm babbling... funny how you do that to me. You even said why I don't go away... because I know, without a doubt, that your love is held firmly in my arms.
Erm I'm never gonna be a professional critic *8)

Love, Eric.

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