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ashlerr
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 23
chino hills, ca usa

0 posted 1999-07-23 04:06 AM


in a constant realm of concentration
leaning towards a disintegration
of thought and hope for something real
to be bestowed to know to feel

by and by till there is no more
a passive way to even the score
bringing on and bringing by
a final truth to end the lie

of what was thought to end the pain
a magical note sung with refrain
clearing the smoky balmy air
a remedy without a care

to only elude a single thought
rectify all that was taught
lifting away a sea of doubt
lose for all we cared about

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pusskatt
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30
Austrralia
1 posted 1999-07-26 11:13 PM


very nice,
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