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tacojen
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since 1999-07-21
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0 posted 1999-07-21 06:18 PM


Take my hand in your hand and walk me through a lifetime.
Walk me over a bridge of observation.
With me wade through a pool of knowledge.
Together we will climb through a tree of communication.
Over we will walk a mountain of discovery.
Then walk me over a field of honesty.
Walk me down a path of thought.
And at the end of our walk, we will find ourselves in a valley of friends.
Together we will understand a lifetime of love.

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elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-07-21 06:50 PM


i like your play with words, especially the "valley of friends"...welcome to the forum

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~


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