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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 1999-07-21 05:29 PM


I’m not the devil because I know I’m defeated
He is the ruler but he’ll soon be unseated
He gives me sin so I would choose the dark side
Tells me I’m worthless so I’ll never make stride

He is the master of wicked device
How to be so evil and come over nice
I will not worship false idols at his will
He makes me forget that I’m doing it still

I’m not the devil I could not get that tan
Although I am in the sun as much as I can
He prepares a place I can bathe in the fire
For all to see they’d think it was my desire

I fight the devil from this gravity well
He draws me farther down reaching to hell
To take this all lightly I just can’t afford
Heavy on my heart weighs Jesus my Lord

I’m not the devil though his work will inspire
Make boys lawyers and girls bodies for hire
He is the savior for all losing their fight
I feel a little tug taking me into the night


-Please to meet you hope you guess my name
What’s confusing you is the nature of my game
Sympathy for the Devil
Rolling Stones





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-21-99).]

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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 1999-07-21 07:45 PM


Very well written Walt. Keep the faith in the skies above.
Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-07-21 07:58 PM


"make boys lawyers..." No better words than that! Nice job, Walt.
DreamEvil
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3 posted 1999-07-21 08:26 PM


Very nice indeed, walt.

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Saxoness
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4 posted 1999-07-21 08:35 PM


sorry it took so long, I also like the make boys lawyers line. Well done.

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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Dragon
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5 posted 1999-07-22 10:30 AM


Way to go Walt! Good Work!!
Delores Hall
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6 posted 1999-07-22 11:16 AM


This was interersting.
Gentle Soul
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7 posted 1999-07-23 12:27 PM


I love it walt! keep the faith!
my favorite thing I used to say..
"keep the faith... Love the Lord... Live Forever!!"

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WhtDove
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8 posted 1999-07-26 09:49 PM


Great poem, and thanks for your comments on mine. Hey, we all fall short!
God Bless Ya.

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