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swan
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since 1999-07-19
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california, usa

0 posted 1999-07-19 04:00 PM



Is this all you wanted?
Can you die happy now?
Have you reached your goal yet?
Well you've managed to make me cry.
I think you should go home now.
My patience is sure wearing thin.
I'll show you to the door now, so
i can watch you walk away.
I knew i could never love you, and you knew that i would never change.
It hurts just to be awake now.
I hope you'll understand, some things I just
can't explain. So i really think you should go now.

[This message has been edited by swan (edited 07-19-99).]

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1 posted 1999-07-19 05:07 PM


well said, swan.
However, if your patients is wearing thin, it must be from the hospital food. Or was that patience?

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