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KTrail99
Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 14


0 posted 1999-07-19 02:00 PM


To be young again
I dream sometimes of being there
Dancing in the rain
Never having to cut my hair.

Running after the ice cream man
Screaming for him to stop
I ran and ran and ran
The first ice cream of summer, you could not top

Riding my bicycle
Till I was breathless and faint
Then playing on my brothers tricycle
When I was caught, acting like a saint

No school, no job,
No cares no care
Just eating a corn cob
Bought at the state fair

Everything new, everything fun
No bills, no boss, no bed time
Nothing is ever in a hurry to be done
If I do something wrong, it is no big crime


To be young again would be great
But, there would be one drawback
High school, college and that very first date
Due to these, I will never go back

I have my life
I have my profession
I love my wife
And I am perfectly happy with my meditation

Of the time I had
And the friends, family, and fun
Of the time I spent with my dad
When we sat fishing in the sun

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Sundance
Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123

1 posted 1999-07-19 02:16 PM


I feel like their should be more! But the part that was there was great!!! Keep 'em commin'!


~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
2 posted 1999-07-19 02:20 PM


Oh...yes...to be young again......
Thank you for bringing back such fond memories...Very nicely written!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."


elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-07-19 05:15 PM


all i could do after reading your poem was sigh...thanks for the trip down memory lane

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...



Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
4 posted 1999-07-19 06:06 PM


Thanks for the memory trip. Yah, I could have gone for more too, but I'm not sure how.

I had a great childhood. Hell, I even liked highschool and college. First dates... got some wonderful memories there too. Would love to do it all over again, but I'll just have to be content with getting older and thank God that I've got kids to help me relive those earlie carless times. Thanks again.

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