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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
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0 posted 1999-07-17 01:48 PM


The storm clouds come and shadow me
I long for shelter a safe place to be
I struggle I try I run out of breath
Peace come quickly bring me death

Just then it rains and cleanses my heart
The wonder the joy a new day to start
The storm passes quickly the thunder fades
I hold you and whisper "I'll love you always"

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...

© Copyright 1999 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
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1 posted 1999-07-17 02:37 PM


this is good. I liked it.
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
2 posted 1999-07-17 08:44 PM


Uh Huh this was very good !!
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