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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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ABLUTION'Sonnet As vernal coverlet seals winter's snow, From nimbus urn, Aquarian heart so sleight Decants time's cleansing waterfalls below In pure ablution of past season's blight. Remanding discord and consouling strife, This host befalls renewed vivacity ~ Once sallow hearts now carpet verdant life, With resurrected faith that we may see Effluent love. Spring nascency's begun, Anointing solar rays' descent on rills Of rainbows hues ~ reflecting golden sun In bounteous eyes of springing daffodils. Enlightened by a sapient sun above, Inspired by ablutions' flowing love.  ------------------ Nan's Morsels netpoets.net/nan/index.html |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
How do you do that? Makes me want to read it over and over... (I might have to get my dictionary to check your spelling, Miss!) hehe.... what a vocabulary! Excellent!  dp |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Nan, finding a poem from you on the forum is like finding a glass of water in the middle of the sun soaked desert! Delicious and refreshing. Just what I needed today. You don't post often enough for my taste! This is excellent!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I see you posted the sonnet you promised and you are right, it is delightful reading. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you muchly, my friends.... deVine, I'm really trying to find time to write some new stuff..... It might not happen for a couple of weeks, though - I've hardly got time to read, never mind write until summer school is over...  |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
beautiful sonnet |
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