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Margaret
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since 1999-06-15
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0 posted 1999-06-15 10:16 PM


Why do I always feel so alone
Even when around so many others
I still feel like an outsider
Different from my sisters and brothers.
I thought I was strong and brave
Able to handle what life had to give
But I never knew the likes of hardships
Until they devoured my desire to live.
Although some days seem to be better
Than thebefore and some to follow
It's hard to recognize the natural high
When inside I feel dead and hollow.
Who would I tell this tale my mood
And quite frankly who would really care
So I put on my smile for the world to see
And hope my loneliness will disappear.

© Copyright 1999 Margaret - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
1 posted 1999-06-23 11:01 PM


A poem full of emotion. I know I have felt this way a time or two in my life. Very well written, Margaret. I hope to see more of your work.
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