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Evil's Dream
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Evil's Dream |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA 
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I shall warp and twist your mind All of your secret fears I shall find I shall dominate all of mankind Humanity belongs to me I shall cause hatred, strife and war When you cry for relief you shall suffer more I am the victor you needn't keep score The world belongs to me I shall torment and torture your soul Pervert and abase you then swallow you whole There is no mercy in a heart black as coal Hades belongs to me Minions of evil respond to my call On all true believers my wrath shall fall Crush faith and hope until evil rules all Heaven belongs to me When I am faced with that final fight I shall prevail and douse His light None shall survive my endless night Eternity belongs to me... ------------------ Steven Seaman A burden shared is a burden lightened A life shared is a life enriched |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marvelous! One of your best so far!!  |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
You strike fear in the very pit of my heart and soul! I agree with "the deVine one", one of your greatest. This poem was so threatening it was wonderful! What power you gave to evil... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I think you captured the sub-conscienceness of Evil perfectly. Very, very strong and final... one can almost hear the final welp of hope as it's light is extinguished beneath the sole of darkness and despair. Have a nice day |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
sea...you're a devil! (albeit a very talented one)! |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I shiver and shudder, what an awesome affect you have with this one! ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Perfect description of my mood, I applaud this piece!! ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i love the title in your dreams lucifer..great poem |
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seaslady Junior Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 43 |
hmmm.... very interesting.... |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Congratulations Sea another excellent poem. |
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