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Raven
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since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 07:43 PM

I love him
But why do I run?
Afraid of the pain
That still lingers from the last.
He wonders why
What can I say?
I'll start to cry.
I hate being hurt so easily
I promise myself I won't give my heart away
And right when I'm so strong
Proud to say I'm not in love
I realize that my heart has long since gone
Perhaps it was never meant to be
The pain, the hurt
The apathy
In the end I'm alone
The next one shall come along
And say he'll never hurt me
And the moon will reflect in his starry eyes
I'd rather have loved and lost
Then never loved at all
Then again what is love?
Pain, jealousy, pleasure and joy?
I feel the tears and anger most of all

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

Genea
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since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

1 posted 1999-06-27 01:33 PM

i dont agree with your title.

Krystal
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

2 posted 1999-06-27 03:16 PM

I really liked this one, good job! I think it reflects the way many people feel, myself included.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 1999-06-27 03:50 PM

This poem reflects feelings we all have shared, I'm sure. I especially like the way the following lines are written since there is a rhythm in the words.

"And right when I'm so strong
Proud to say I'm not in love
I realize that my heart has long since gone
Perhaps it was never meant to be
The pain, the hurt
The apathy"

Thanks for sharing.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-06-27 09:55 PM

My sentiments exactly! Love and pain remain the same.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.Read my post, "Nameless", please.

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 06-27-99).]

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-06-29 05:25 AM

Re-reading this, I thought others should take a closer look.

Raven
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since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

6 posted 1999-06-30 01:25 AM

Genea~Perhaps you don't agree with my title...but from my point of view, based on my experiences, it's perfect.

Krystal~Thank you, I wrote this poem after I lost someone that meant alot to me, oh well at least I got something out of the experience

doreen peri~Thanks!

DreamEvil~I totally agree, to know love you must know pain

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-06-30 03:43 PM

Man, do I understand this one. And I for one, also believe with love comes pain, and usually a lot of it. Excellent job, Raven.

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*Krista Knutson*

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