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Open Poetry #1

Tonight

Enrique
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 52
San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-07 01:31 AM

As we sat alone tonight
And watched the snow and moon shine bright,
I realized where I want to stay,
Yet I couldn't find the words to say,
But words could not begin to show,
The emotions I felt while watching the snow.
You satisfy my every need
Like a fantasy from a book to read,
A book which was brought to me
From some direction that I could not see.
Now we sit, keeping each other close,
Both wondering how fate has chose,
Two people who feel their hearts are right,
To share their warmth and feelings tonight.

- Enrique

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

1 posted 1999-07-12 01:10 PM

a love strong enough to melt the snow, methinks

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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-08-01 12:05 PM

Ah, love is so wonderful... I can definitely relate, especially now..beautiful poem.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 1999-08-01 09:39 PM

Beautiful!

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