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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
As sorrow fills your eyes, and emotions fan the flames. I will not tell you lies, of that nothing is gained. I see your tears flow, as pain shows in your smile. The answers I don't know, it will take a little while. I know that you are scared, and many things have brought you down. Now you know I care, Let's take away the frown. I told you I would help you, I'll try to help you mend. This is all I know to do, after all, you're my best friend. (for Beth L.) DBeth ------------------ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That is sweet...it shows you care!! I hope all is good and well  Nice!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Thanks for asking.I'm o.k. I guess.My friend is having some real hard times right now.I'm kinda worried about her. HUGS-----DBeth ------------------ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely...hope you friend is ok.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very sweet!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know this was posted for your friend, but it fills other with much hope and love as well. Thank you for sharing. |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Thank you all for the sweet replies.I am glad to know it helps others to relate.I just wish I knew what to tell my friend.She found out she has cancer and got evicted from her home the same day.I hate seeing her cry,and wish I could help to ease her pain.She is really down.I don't know what to do. Anyways, thank you all again for the wonderful comments.Hugs to everyone! DBeth ------------------ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
DBeth...seeing the problems your friend is facing makes me realize how truly small my own problems are. My thoughts are with your friend, and with you, that you may comfort her as only a friend can. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Caroline,Thank you for the kind words.It seems when we are down we can always look around and find someone worse off than we are. I want to do more for her but I don't know what else to do. Hugs to ya! DBeth ------------------ |
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MissQ Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 12Clarksdale, MS 38614 |
That was so beautiffully put....had to send it to my best friend ! |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
I hope your friend likes it.Thank you for commenting. Friendship doubles our joy,and divides our grief. Hugs DBeth ------------------ |
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