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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-15 05:36 AM


The Rose

Leaves alone

Fear unknown

Searching for the rose

Lost

Blackness draws near

Crashing through leaves

Warmth lies in shadows

Strange among these trees

Unfamiliar to the eye

A rose

Impossible to see

Secluded in an image

Beneath obscurity

Through the gloom

Fading from view

Slipping

Forever passed

Vanished


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Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-15 07:27 PM


Interesting format on this one...but it flows nicely

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-15 07:28 PM


Thanks
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-09-15 07:34 PM


The sands of time are forever flowing and changing the world and what we know.
I really like this one..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-15 07:36 PM


This is still a favorite of mine!!!
Thanks so much guys!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-09-15 08:55 PM


This was different! Not quite what I expected. A nice surprise though.
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 1999-09-16 12:22 PM


Thanks!!! I like to surprise people!!
Am glad I did whtdove!!

Justbleu

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